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Tuesday, November 12, 2013

REFLECTIONS ON THE STONE HAMMER POEMS (1960-1975) - Review by Tanja Cvetkovic


Review byTanja Cvetkovic
 
REFLECTIONS  ON  THE STONE HAMMER POEMS (1960-1975)
 
The Stone Hammer Poems, published in 1975, comprises the poems written between 1960 and 1975.  The collection opens with Old Man Stories and includes iconic poems like Stone Hammer Poem, Pumpkin: A Love Poem, F.R.Grove: The Finding, Meditation on Tom Thomson, Poem of Albert Johnson, Elegy for Wong Toy, Mile Zero.
The collection shows Kroetsch’s principle of combining memory and meditation to produce a true poem. His poems convey his vision and prophetic voice as the result of memory used in the process of creation in relation to the past events. The poems are Kroetsch’s examples of the search for the original place and the original voice hidden under the layers of inherited meanings. Sometimes the search is nostalgic as in Elegy for Wong Toy or existential involving the rebirth of the authentic voice as in Mile Zero. The process of finding the authentic voice through memory is something that Kroetsch refers to as decreation, uninventing, unnaming.
Stone Hammer Poem  is a poem about the search for the original place and home as embodied by the stone. The poem releases associations and memories attached to the stone hammer. It was found by the poet’s father “on a rockpile in the/north-west corner of what/he thought of/ as his wheatfield”,1  and immediately invokes in the speaker meditation on its origins and its prior history. Linking the history of the stone to the history of the land, the speaker assumes that the stone belonged to a Blackfoot or a Cree man.
The stone makes the connection to place and problematizes the sense of ownership. There is a list of owners/predecessors starting from the Indian, the Queen, CPR, the poet’s grandfather and father who “gave it to his son/(who sold it)”.2 The problem arises with the son who sells the land and who actually owns the land by not owning it anymore. The possession through memory appears to be more lasting than real legal ownership. The land comes into existence in the poem which is the reflection on its origins.
The poet meditates on different uses and meanings of the stone. The stone is “a million/ years older than/the hand that/chipped stone or//”3 It is a symbol of imagined origins:
“It is a stone
old as the last
Ice Age, the
retreating/ the
recreating ice,
the retreating
buffalo, the
retreating Indians”4
For the poet to retreat into time is to recreate the moment of conception. The stone merges the present into the memories of the past and brings to the surface several ancestors who transformed it to suit their needs. The stone was turned into a maul, and “this stone/become a hammer/of stone, this maul//”5 Eventually it was found as a “paperweight on my desk/ where I begin/this poem//”6 The stone becomes the poem and is firmly connected to the origins of writing.
By searching for the stone’s past and revealing its history, the poet invites us to submerge into the realm of contradictions, to be involved in the process of knowing by way of paradox:
“?what happened
I have to/ I want
to know (not know)
? WHAT HAPPENED”7 
 
The poet wants knowing to meet unknowing (not know) in the realm of the chaos of meanings that the stone produces.
The collection contains four poems dedicated to four people the poet wants to remember: Elegy for Wong Toy, F.P. Grove: The Finding, Poem of Albert Johnson, Meditation on Tom Thomson.  According to Peter Thomas ,the poems are “the most richly self-reflective group of poems Kroetsch has published so far.”8 The poems are about the four iconic persons in the history of Canada and are written in the form of elegy.
Through the figure of Wong Toy, the owner of the coffee house in Heisler, the poet speaks of the immigrant who gives his own contribution to the history of Canada. Along with the poet’s memories, we see the man, Wong Toy, whose silent presence plays an important role in Kroetsch’s childhood.
Another “silent man”,9 “the poet of our survival”,10 who was hunted to death by a group of men in the Northwest Territories and the Yukon in 1932, “Mad Trapper of Rat River”, is Albert Johnson. Though he became a mythic figure of the North, he “will give no name”11  and his wordlessness  and silence expressed the  existence of the North in the poem.
Tom Thomson, a member of the Group of Seven, is the subject of another elegy. He drowned mysteriously in Lake Algonquin one morning and became “our  story/ and art, man, art    is the essential/ luxury   the imperative QUESTION (?)”.12 By descending into silence, like Albert Johnson, Tom Thomson becomes one of many characters who suffered death by water in Kroetsch’s fiction, the act which is very Orphic in its nature. Thomas explains the idea of a watery descent “as a return to the undifferentiated source of being, a profound un-naming of the self”.13
F.P.Grove underwent the process of unnaming of the self when he arrived in the New World assuming a new identity. He is in search of “the name under the name”,14 of “a new man” inventing (beyond /America) a new world//”15 Though Grove dreams of Europe “if only to find    a place to be from”,16 he can’t rely on European heritage in the New World.  His New World self can’t be voiced and “the finding” is lost in the words of the poem whose ultimate nature is still not transformative enough for the new self to be born.
The metamorphic nature of the self is expressed through twelve versions of Blackfoot Old Man stories. In Old Man Stories, the poet explores the trickster principle with the trickster figure demonstrating the instability of the self capable of knowledge and creative energy changing its forms. The central fable is the story of the shaman, Old Man, casting a buffalo chip into a river while predicting the eternity of human life.
Pumpkin: A Love Poem  is a symbolic and self-reflective poem. It is about the power of imagination and vision which transform reality into a symbolic order of creation. The poem combines the process of creation with the erotic impulse which the repressed self seeks to release. In the essay “The Fear of Women in Prairie Fiction: An Erotics of Space” (1979), Kroetsch associates the erotic impulse to the creative act of writing. The poet places himself “inside the pumpkin”17 and by doing so says: “I have entered/ new territory”,18 thus fashioning a new head out of pumpkin in the shape of the mind’s new vision. The central part is the mouth as a symbol of voice linked to the metaphor of creation which unites all opposites in the poem into an orgasmic act of freedom. Kroetsch is ironic here and the whole story of a voice caught in a pumpkin is a trick he plays on the reader.
If the reader wants to brush up on Kroetsch’s trickster principle and the way he explores the origins of place and writing, and how his meditations on the object work out different meanings, then this collection of poems, though published a long ago, is worth (re)reading.
 
 

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Book review : The Sad Phoenician Robert Kroetsch


 Reviewed by David S. West

A POEM SHOULD BE economic and precise. It should be free of too strong an authorial presence. Objectivity is a virtue that lends shapeliness and focus to the finished product. B u t Kroetsch is writing about writing, and that changes the rules. There is always, here, a sense of the author lurking behind the language, manipulating, contriving, and interjecting at will. There is much will- fullness, butlittle restraint, little attempt at control or discipline. In some way this is a disadvantage, but it does reflect the subject. In a book concerned with basiccom- munication, these characteristics illustrate the struggle of the individual to express publicly his emotions and responses to the external world. Theinner and outer worlds meet o n t h e plain of language, where poetry is the struggle to share ex- perience andperception. Andduringthe life-long conflict, an author must develop a sense of what language and communi- cation mean tohimboth asthemeansof expression and as an objective phenome- non — the whole range of the sounds and shapes of letters and words and all that they can be made to mean. What- ever the penalties for being a poet, at least the satisfaction of putting words on paper rewards the author; no matter what else goes wrong in life, he has his 'poetry to protect' him: "I have mywork to sustain me, my poetry, the satisfaction / of a jobwell done...." But the poetry alone is never enough. The poet lives in a living world; life rushes on about him,he responds to it, he makes it part of his living changing craft. T h e poet is a life-junkie; hooked on it, harmed by it, he is beyond the reach of any sedative except the actof writing, which relieves the aches of life even as it dredges them from the inner deeps. The poet becomes dependent on language and life but remains as human as a n y bricklayers: " I d o have feelings, just because I'm a poet doesn't mean / I have no feelings of my own, poets are human; I am,you/ might say,a kindof Phoenician, with reference, that is, / to my trading in language, even in,to stretch a point, / ha, my being at sea." Kroetsch is always present, reminding the reader that yes there is a real live person behind the poetry, that yes poets and fallible and human — that they want to be recognized as people just as much as they desire fame as poets. We are aware of the poet: "the dreamer, him- self: /lurching, leaping, flying; о to be mere gerund; no past, / no future: what do you do in life: I ing." Yet there is no room for complacency. Life is full of surprises: "once a year a rubber breaks and we / learn to count" ; no matter how we try, we always face uncertainty. Love and its uncertainties are part of living, and often the poet retreats from emotion in wounded confusion; he is "The Sad Phoenician of Love / slighted by the woman." But, as with language and life, the poet is drawn mothlike to the flame of love. Singed, he writes an- other poem and survives: "lonely is only lonely, it has no other name like / hand or hope or trust, or pissing against the wind, / it has no habit of upside-down, it slams no doors, / it does not fly south in autumn." The urgent demands of sexuality as a means of expression and fulfillment are as loud and raucous as the insistent call of art, of the addition to life and love. One is forced to venture continually into the outer world for one's needs: love, comfort, reassurance. And, as with any voyage or quest, the journey is fraught with peril: "keep an ear cocked for sirens, you one-eyed mariner" in the voyage of life where communica- tion requires as much skill as sailing a ship. The Sad Phoenician is an ambitious undertaking; an existential portrait of the plight of sensitive individuals, it is an excursion into the turbulent waters of communication that it attempts to de- scribe and chart even as it traverses them for the first time. It is a reminder that each day is capable of presenting a new world, a new-beginning as life-affirming as the tree in the garden, and as dan- gerous : you're out of it, the lady said, she was very polite, she wore a chair on her head, a basket between her knees full of salmon; a butterfly almost the shade of a Baltimore oriole licked its perfect proboscis to her right nipple: she was the guardian of the tree, that was clear . . . the tree itself stood in the distance behind her, possibly green, possibly not a tree at all, a sail A complex poem, The Sad Phoenician defies full analysis in the space of a re- view: its fuller significance the reader himself must determine. As if to confirm that the first section of the book is about the poet as human being as well as creative artist, the second part, "The Silent Poet Sequence," pre- sents the poet more objectively. The poems employ a schizoid splitting of per- sonality; two characters emerge: The Poet and The Professor. Both are the same. Any poet lives a double life: if he lives for his writing, he must still earn bread. If he lives for his teaching, he must still answer to his compulsion to write. Sometimes the two urges conflict: and Earache the Red, at coffee, for god's sake hit the sack early, he says, you look lile you never sleep but watch those dirty dreams; he winks and shakeshisspooninmydirection but I don't let on that I understand but Earache, there's a new law, he says, you're legally responsible for all your dreams and I buy his coffee but just last night, while he snored in her arms, I pitched black dirt at his win- dow and walled himin but he doesn't let on . . . ("The Silent Poet FindsOut") As may be seen from this excerpt, the form of the poems is an experiment, separating conjunctions from clauses. The sequence ends with a further devo- lution of words into shapes — letters divided by appearance rather than sense. The last page, once one deciphers it, affirms the thirst for life and love and experience apparent from t h e first. T h e humour found throughout the book is hard to describe, yet it has a good deal to do with the final willingness to under- go thefrustrations, failures, andimbecili- ties of life encountered during the quest for ways of expression.

Book Review : "Travelling, Companions"





Reviewed by Weldon Hunter


There are many ways to die while travelling in Peru by Alanna F. Bondar is a hybrid text of poetry and prose that juxtaposes her experiences as an eco-tourist in Peru with the familiar and familial landscapes of Northern Ontario. Bondar announces her discovery of the surprising relations between the two at the beginning of her poetic narrative: You are among the first to be told of Peru’s tourism cover story. This secret knowledge is your reward for reading Canadian poetry. As national and continental boundaries are blurred, so are the distinctions between prose and poetry. Bondar employs diacritical marks of linebreaks (/) within prose paragraphs to disrupt generic conventions and geographic spatiality:
What the traveler takes into the virtual reality tank is everything & nothing at all. // You are reading the output from my collected data—from Northern Ontario, my home and native land & Peru, likewise remote & in spots under-populated, with space to explore a wilder geopsyche.
Bondar alternates narrative perspectives between places, frontiers, and solitudes, always in lively and convivial voices.
Julie Bruck’s collection, Monkey Ranch, is notable for winning the 2012 Governor General’s Award for Poetry, as well as for possessing the kind of cover that will garner curious looks if read in public. The poems themselves are witty and formally elegant, often balancing the tragic with the comic, the human with the anthropoid. Bruck’s poems are keenly observed, but they go further than that rather pedestrian classification, in exploring what happens to our perspective when our non-human companions stare back at us—at zoos, in our homes, and even on the covers of our poetry books! In The Mandrill’s Gaze, the titular beast’s hazel eyes, are small, deep-set, and when / he fixes them on yours, I dare you, / turn away. Bruck also raises the question of how we look at, look for, and look after our fellow humans. In the poem Missing Jerry Tang, when the search for that titular character peters out, the flyers of the missing man are replaced with more recent sightings: / pictures of the two blue herons who nest here, / an egret teetering on its fragile orange legs. There is the sense that animals and humans live parallel, but not always synchronous lives, where momentous human events, like the destruction of the Twin Towers, only present a small disturbance / quickly settled to the eels of Jamaica Bay, Queens, in the poem Scientists Say.
John Gilmore’s Head of a Man presents an unusual twist on the conventional travel narrative. The protagonist of this spare, lyrical novel remains mostly in one room, sequestered in a hostel in an unidentified Asian country. Unlike other tourists, who come to see the valley and the terraces . . . stay a few nights, and then move on, our reluctant narrator (who may or may not be named “Joe”) is locked in an unsettling stasis, unable or unwilling to provide the details of a recent trauma. In fact, he seems, as much as the reader, to be waiting for his story to surface: I am at rest. A tongue at rest. Waiting. The novel shows that our societal discourse of distress is no easy path to catharsis. Instead of language containing trauma, in the sense of healing or holding within bounds—the talking cure—our narrator reveals how language is comprised of dangerous elements, which can inflame our suffering: Words cut the throat. Scratch stone. Leave lines behind. Once incised, indelible. Gilmore’s minimalism would make for an interesting travelling companion with Bondar’s loquacious volume.

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

OUR STORIES – SEED CATALOGUE


Author: Tanja Cvetkovic

 

OUR STORIES – SEED CATALOGUE

 

Seed Catalogue (1977) continues Robert Kroetsch’s tradition of long poems (The Stone Hammer Poems, The Ledger  1975) and is considered one of Canada’s most essential poems. The poem takes on a new poetic form with Kroetsch’s use of  postmodern technique of negation and meditation through memory. Kroetsch’s concern about the inability of language to capture reality and the importance of oral tradition resound in these lines from the poem: “We silence words/by writing them down.”

Throughout his poetic career  Kroesch was fascinated with the notion of place, with finding a new poetic form that would suit the place he lived in, and with finding a new language expression for physical landscape. In his poetic manifesto “Unhiding the Hidden” (1974), he explains that under the influence of foreign cultures, the language that is used in Canadian literature is not authentic anymore and under the layers of inauthenticity, we must dig for fragments that are our own. The Canadian writer’s task is

“that he works with a language, within a literature, that appears to be authentically his own, and not a borrowing. But just as there was in the Latin word a concealed Greek experience, so there is in the Canadian word a concealed other experience, sometimes British, sometimes American.”1

Writers resolve the tension between being someone else and the demands of authenticity “by the radical process of demythologizing the systems that threaten to define them. Or, more comprehensively, they uninvent the world.”2 Kroetsch’s terms “uninvent”, “uncreate”, “unhide”, “decreate”, denote a cultural process of creating an order which is unique and different from the process of imitating an order and literature. The search for the original language and place of origins is named “dreams of origins” by Kroetsch.

Kroetsch uses archaeological method and oral tradition as the basis for his inquiry into place and the meditation on a common object. While the objects of meditation in previous long poems were the stone and the ledger found at home, the seed catalogue was dug up in the public place in the Glenbow archives by chance in 1975. Kroetsch explains in “The Moment of the Discovery of America”:

I found a 1917 catalogue in the Glenbow archives in 1975. I translated that seed catalogue into a poem called ‘Seed Catalogue’. The archaeological discovery, if I might call it that, brought together for me the oral tradition and the dream of origins.”3

In the poem Kroetsch lifts the seed catalogue, the document, to a literary expression by combining an objective narrative with lyrical elements. The document assumes the element of fantasy and is turned into a poem by the poet’s imagination. The poet retells the history of the prairie town in this palimpsest by unhiding, erasing and recreating meaning through meditation.

The poem rewrites one of the most popular myths of North America, the story of the prairie as garden. Kroetsch again continues the long tradition of prairie writers and poets who present the prairies of the West as the garden to be cultivated offering a new promise of the “unnamed” country. Kroetsch is one of the prairie writers along Ralph Connor, Nellie McClung, R.J.C. Stead, whom Dick Harrison considers as the writers choosing “the garden and not the earlier ‘Frontier Myth’ of the American West when they needed a way of ordering their perceptions of the new environment.”4 What we see at work in the poem is actually the construction of place, the prairie town, as a new world garden where the dominant question is “How do you grow …?” out of the seed advertized in the catalogue. The seed promises the growth and “wondrous beauty/of both flowers and foliage”5, which could bloom “into the dark of January,”6 planting the prairie as the new Eden. The growing of the mythic garden in the plains reminds of the colonial expansion and the westward settlements as the poet indicates at the very beginning of the poem:

No. 176 – Copenhagen Market Cabbage: ‘This new introduction, strictly speaking,  is in every respect a thoroughbred, a cabbage  of highest pedigree,  and is creating considerable flurry among professional gardeners all over the world.’7

The words “thoroughbred”, “highest pedigree”, and even “professional” carry with themselves the whole colonial value system which the poet tries to disintegrate to reach for the authentic prairie value.

The poem is also about the very nature of  poem and the way it grows. In section six the speaker asks “But how do you grow a poet?” and answers:

“Start: with an invocation

invoke –

 

His muse is

his muse/ if

memory is

 

and you have

no memory then

no meditation

no song (shit

we’re up against it)”8

These lines show how memory and meditation merge into poem. By using memory and remembering the past events, the poet is engaged in the act of creation while telling the stories and reordering events. In that vein, Seed Catalogue is the poem determined not only by place, the prairie, but also by the meditation on the seed catalogue items: vegetables, flowers, grass, beans and grains, which write the garden poem of the prairie. Since it speaks for the prairie, defining it anew, the poem is the prairie or as the speaker explains:

“This is a prairie road.

This road is the shortest distance

between nowhere and nowhere.

This road is a poem.”9

The poem as a road which leads to nowhere is synonymous with the place which waits to be put into words because place is constructed through language, stories, myths. The speaker points that fiction is most appropriate to denote place, taking Rudy Wiebe’s fiction as an example, who “must lay great black steel lines of/ fiction, break up the space with huge design and, like/ the fiction of the Russian steppes, build a giant/ artifact. No song can do that…” 10  As for the poet, the creator of both poem and space/place, after the poem comes into existence, he leaves “no trace”, only “a spoor of wording/ a reduction to mere black.”11

The garden is both the literal garden on the poet’s homestead in Heisler, Alberta, and the metaphorical garden, the field of his poem, which is grown and dug by way of literary archaeology. Section one of the poem opens by introducing the poet’s garden in the transition season from winter to spring. We find out that the fall has set in before the poet has had a chance to learn how to garden. The poet’s family homestead is barren, unsettling, unstable:

“No trees

around the house.

Only the wind.

Only the January snow.

Only the summer sun.

The home place:

a terrible symmetry.”12

The poet erases his home place depicting it as treeless, lifeless and waste. The process of de(con)struction of the prairie place starts in section one, and is emblematically represented by the destruction of the Heisler hotel in section four. The Heisler hotel was burnt down one night on June 21, 1919: “Everything/ in between: lost. Everything: an absence.”13  The presence is lost in absence and the poet starts speaking of presence through the string of absences. After the burning down of the Heisler hotel, the poet lists the absence of all these culturally modified things:

“Everything: an absence

of satin sheets

of embroidered pillow cases

of tea towels and English china

of silver serving spoons.”14

But after the destruction, a new beginning is at sight. The poet asks the question of the new beginning: “How do you grow a prairie town?”15

The absence of trees is emblematic of the process of unnaming and erasure that the poet starts. The trope of the tree is particularly important for Kroetsch’s poems. Since Kroetsch deconstructs the garden myth, the tree, as a symbol of knowledge and origins in the garden of Eden, is associated with absence in this poem. In the end of the poem, the description of treeless homestead is followed by the question:”Adam and Eve got drownded -/Who was left?”16 The poet introduces the shade of his homestead, the shade of the myth of Adam and Eve and the garden of Eden as well as of his mother from the very first section of the poem. Everything that is left of the garden of his homestead is the voice of his dying mother: “bring me the radish seeds.”17

By erasure and negation, the poet gives the whole list of absences of the European cultural history. On the list we find the absence of “silkworms”, “kings and queens”, “Lord Nelson”, “Sartre and Heidegger”, “pyramids”, “lions”, “Heraclitus”, but also “the Seine, the Rhine, the Danube”, etc. The prairie becomes culturally erased place without history. Thus the poet finds himself  in his inquiry in the home place which he calls a “double hook”: a place erased by the poem but still there for the poet to deal with it.  After the erasure and unnaming, the poet is in an uneasy situation. On the road leading “between nowhere and nowhere”, he starts asking questions: “How do you grow a garden? How do you grow a prairie town? How do you grow a poet?”, the questions which do not affirm presence immediately. We arrived at the point of place erasure, nowhere, facing the poet who, after uncreating, as an archeaologist, searches for a way to create anew. The prairie road and the poem leading nowhere symbolize the impossibility of language to articulate place.

Destruction culminates in section nine, when the poet describes “the dangers of merely living” and his ancestors who returned to the Old World and died in the bombing of Cologne – “a strange planting”18 - the act marking the absence of his cousins: Anna Weller and Kenneth MacDonald.  The poet ends the section in the same way he ends the description of his homestead: “A terrible symmetry.”19

In order to create a fixed and stable home, the poet determines the exact position of his home place:

“the home place: N.E. 17-42-16-W4th Meridian.

the home place: one and a half miles of Heisler, Alberta,

                           on the correction line road

                            and three miles south.”20

Kroetsch gives us the address of his homestead: Heisler, Alberta, on the correction line, three miles south. The correction line divides the place into smaller prairie settlements and its importance is underlined by Deborah Keahey:”The correction line and the physicist’s relativity both function wonderfully as metaphors for the fundamental instability of our notions of place, of the way we impose various and changeable perceptual grids on space.”21  That the place is the result of our own imagination and creative perception is witnessed by Kroetsch himself who, in one of his numerous essays, explains that prairie places and farms are remembered, imagined real places:

“On the prairies the small town and the farm are not merely places, they are remembered places. When they were the actuality of our lives we had realistic fiction, and we had almost no poetry at all. Now in this dream condition, as dreamtime fuses into the kind of narrative we call myth, we change the nature of the novel. And we start, with a new terrible, energy, to write the poems of the imagined real place.”22

Kroetsch insists on finding new names for the prairie place and landscape, since the old ones carry with themselves the inherited layers of meaning of the European past and culture which are not a true reflection of the new environment anymore. The impulse of rewriting place and discovering a new sense of belonging to home is inherent in his phrase ‘local pride’. ‘Local pride’ draws on the authenticity of our life and experience. By citing Williams Carlos Williams, he concludes: “the acquiring of a local pride enables us to create our own culture – by ‘lifting an environment to expression.’”23

Seed Catalogue  abounds in different prairie stories: the story of the poet’s homestead,  of his father trying to shoot the badger,  of Pete Knight, king of all cowboys, the poet’s love story with Germaine, the burning down of the Heisler hotel, the bombing of Cologne, the story of Rudy Wiebe, Al Purdy, Jim Bacque. The short fragment about the porcupine trying to cross the road and ending up “dead in the ditch” is especially significant. The porcupine is caught up in the intertextuality crossing from one fragmented text to another. The story can be related to Kroetsch’s essay  “The Exploding Porcupine” in which Kroetsch argues in favor of violence necessary to explode narrative conventions making space for new poetic forms. The erasure of the dominant narratives and images of the prairie place leaves a possibility to create and build anew.

The prairie poet, who “under the quick erasure/ of snow, invites a flight,”24  is still in search of traces, fragments, absences that may point to presence in absence. Following the erasure of the home place and the story of the garden of Eden, the poet plants a new garden which marks “the end of winter: seeding/time.”25 The prairie garden is “the other garden” which doesn’t grow the seeds of “wondrous beauty”, but the seeds of plain brome grass   resistant to colonial influences and fit for survival in the prairie environment:

“”No amount of cold will kill it. It withstands the summer suns. Water may stand on it for several weeks without apparent injury. The roots push through the soil, throwing up new plants continually. It starts quicker than other grasses in the spring. Remains green longer in the fall. Flourishes under absolute neglect.’”26

The brome grass which “flourishes under absolute neglect” is suggestive of a presence in an empty land that follows erasure. It withstands the summer sun and remains green longer in the fall, pointing to resilience, survival, the qualities which are important in differentiating the prairie from the colonial notions of landscape. The brome grass becomes an important element of writing the prairie into existence since it is congenial to the local environment.

The model for a new place-making strategy is the gopher.

         “The gopher was the model.

Stand up straight:

telephone poles

grain elevators

church steeples.

Vanish, suddenly: the

Gopher was the model.”27

The gopher as well as the badger in section two stand for disappearance and erasure. Unlike telephone poles, grain elevators and church steeples, the gopher and the badger live underground and subvert the garden and town. The town buildings vanish suddenly when the gopher appears at the end of the passage. The two burrowing rodents undermine and violate the garden from within the way dominant narratives, images and conventions should be exploded and subverted. The prairie story itself is hidden underground and it is by means of archaeology that the poet brings it to the surface.

Kroetsch subverts and mocks dominant poetic conventions in this poem. The importance of poetry is undercut by the introduction of Al Purdy, the poet of the vernacular, and one of the key figures in Canadian poetry. The setting of the scene is a local restaurant where the sublime notion of Purdy’s poetry is merged with the triviality and marginality of the public place. Reciting poems in the restaurant, in a different context and in a different atmosphere, has a special power but is in contrast with the unusual setting: “the waitress asked us to leave. She was rather insistent.”28 There is a sharp contrast and a resistance of the lyrical to the dominant way of perceiving and representing the prairie. The local landscape and  atmosphere that is lifted to literary expression is violated and erased by the socially and culturally performed and accepted norms of behavior.

Kroetsch’s method of subverting  the dominant myths of the West is explicit in parodying the cowboy myth and the garden myth. The poet, assuming the role of the anti-hero subverting the overarching Western myths, tells the story/the poem like Al Purdy or Jim Bacque. Jim Bacque perplexes a woman at the airport in Toronto telling her the story of Pete Knight “Bronc-Busting Champion/of the World”29  who died by falling off a horse. The vernacular story, part of the oral tradition, is put down on the pages of Seed Catalogue and silenced into written language. The paradox and irony lie in the fact that “we silence words/by writing them down”30 where the oral tradition and myth lose  its voice when turned into a written story.

Kroetsch’s ironic treatment of the poetic figures like Jim Bacque and Al Purdy resembles his treatment of heroic myths in his fiction. In The Studhorse Man, Hazard Lepage is a parody of the questing hero who is neither handsome nor strong, who is never in control of his destiny and is finally killed by his horse. Both the poets and Pete Knight are brought down to a comic travesty like Hazard Lepage and turned into anti-heroes. As Dick Harrison explains, this ironic treatment of popular myths by Kroetsch “does place him nearer than any other Canadian novelist to the ‘New Western’ in America”31 as described by Leslie Fiedler in his The Return of the Vanishing American.

In his essay “Robert Kroetsch’s Poetry”, Robert Lecker describes Seed Catalogue as “a compendium of stories”, “a collection of conceptions, a list of various seeds”.32 Like Kroetsch, Lecker acknowledges the importance of oral tradition and points to the fact that “you grow a prairie town, then, by filling it with listeners”.33 The quality of the poet’s creation depends on the ability to listen to the poem. The aural perception is important for Kroetsch to that extent that it brings him in contradiction when writing poetry. It seems as if written word and language distort reality and Kroetsch turns to unnaming and uncreating or even to the possibilities of preliterate communication as, for example, in How I Joined the Seal Herd.

From the very beginning of the poem, the poet asks for the perfection of his ears, the ability to listen:

“I swear it was not     the hearing

            itself         I first refused

it was        the sight of my ears “34 

In his discussion of How I Joined the Seal Herd,  Lecker concludes that this poem is “a kind of ultimate regression, and in that position it calls for nothing less than the death of writing.”35   In Seed Catalogue the poet is at work disintegrating the inherited layers of meaning of foreign culture including written tradition too. Through the complex strategy of unnaming and unfinding, the poet searches for a voice through memory, the unique voice of the prairie that the readers should hear. By avoiding definite structures and demythologizing dominant social and written realities, the poet arrives at the point of renaming, recreating and recovering of authentic voice of the prairie as his home place.

 

1 Robert Kroetsch. The Lovely Treachery of Words: Essays Selected and New. (Toronto: Oxford    University Press, 1989): 58

2 Ibid.

3 Ibid., 7.

4 Dick Harrison. Unnamed Country: The Struggle for a Canadian Prairie Fiction. (Edmonton: The University of Alberta Press, 1972): 72.

5 Robert Kroetsch. Field Notes: 1-8 A continuing poem. (Don Mills, On.: General Publishing Co., 1981).

6 Ibid.

7 Ibid.

8 Ibid.

9 Ibid.

10 Ibid.

11 Ibid.

12 Ibid.

13 Ibid.

14 Ibid.

15 Ibid.

16 Ibid.

17 Ibid.

18 Ibid.

19 Ibid.

20 Ibid.

21 Deborah Keahey. Making It Home: Place in Canadian Prairie Literature. (Winnipeg: The University of Manitoba Press): 4.

22 Robert Kroetsch. The Lovely Treachery of Words: Essays Selected and New. (Toronto: Oxford    University Press, 1989): 7-8.

23 Ibid. 6.

24 Robert Kroetsch. Field Notes: 1-8 A continuing poem. (Don Mills, On.: General Publishing Co., 1981).

25 Ibid.

26 Ibid.

27 Ibid.

28 Ibid.

29 Ibid.

30 Ibid.

31 Dick Harrison. Unnamed Country: The Struggle for a Canadian Prairie Fiction. (Edmonton: The University of Alberta Press, 1972): 207.

32 Robert Lecker. “Robert Kroetsch’s Poetry”. Open Letter  Third Series No. 8 (Spring 1978): 85.

33 Ibid., 86.

34 Robert Kroetsch. Field Notes: 1-8 A continuing poem. (Don Mills, On.: General Publishing Co., 1981).

35 Robert Lecker. “Robert Kroetsch’s Poetry”. Open Letter  Third Series No. 8 (Spring 1978): 86.

 

 

 

 

Friday, October 4, 2013

Book Review :Freedom to Depart by Robert Kroetsch


Reviewed by Russell Morton Brown

ALTHOUGH Robert Kroetsch is primarily a western writer, he is intrigued by the North. It was the setting for his first novel, But We Are Exiles, and now, in his fourth book, he attempts to encounter fully the significance of this half-real, half-hallucinated northern landscape, this unknowable region where the world is reduced to its basic elements and beyond that to a final void. In Gone Indian Jeremy Sadness, an American graduate student, arrives in Edmonton (one of those gateways to the North) in search of a future in the Canadian West, drawn by the Canadian North. He comes seeking the wilderness and in quest of a new identity (he is fascinated by Archie Belaney, that civilized Englishman who transformed himself into "the truest Indian of them all", Grey Owl), but he is ultimately in flight to something much more frightening: " I am looking for nothing. The primal darkness. The purest light. For the first word. For the voice that spoke the first word. The inventor of zero." Gone Indian is the concluding work in Kroetsch's Out West trilogy, which has now moved from the depression thirties (The Words of My Roaring) through the forties (TheStudhorseMan) intothe seventies. Each of the novels in the trilogy deals with the passing of an era, a moment of crisis which forms one more chapter in the history of the Apocalypse : each examines the particular myths by which its society defines itself, wittily interweaving other mythic structures drawn from the larger western tradition, and—-in Gone Indian — blending in Indian myth as well to form a complexly layered whole beneath a deceptively simple surface. The title changes that this final book of the trilogy went through suggests the several ways the novel works. The original title, Funeral Games (Kroetsch says he abandoned it as "too Graeco-Roman"), invokes Book V of the Aeneid, where the funeral games for Anchises celebrated by Aeneas and his men serve as a kind of societal passage rite marking the death of the old Trojan order and the turning toward the yet to be created Roman world. Within the novel the Notikeewin winter games serve a similar function: by diverting Jeremy from his job interview at the University of Alberta they divorce him from the competitive urban culture he has left in the northeast, and thereby prepare him for his final plunge into the North. Kroetsch's second working title,Falling, emphasizes the personal aspect of the novel: Jeremy's perception of his life as perpetual falling/ failing, and his final realization that falling toward death is an inevitable part of life and that falling is the payment for flying. Finally the title Gone Indian (with the intentional ambi- guity of "Gone") catches a number of the dominant themes in the book: the North American fascination with and search for the Edenic, pastoral world ; the novel's ironic play with urban man's romanticization of the Indian and the lost culture he represents; and finally its very serious play with the Indian trickster myth, especially the figure of the sleeping giant who is represented by the wounded, unconscious Roger Dorck. Dorck, whose presence is felt throughout the book (in the opening chapter Jeremy mistakenly acquires his baggage at the airport), represents not only the phallic potency that Jeremy lacks, but also the creative unconscious that Jeremy would release. These various levels of the novel work together to say something about the soci- ety that Kroetsch visualizes as coming to an end in the seventies: the competitive, technological, highly rationalistic order which has rendered Jeremy impotent. Carnival — the ritualized breakdown of order — frees Jeremy from the work ethic but thrusts him into a new world of con- tests and competitions. Jeremy enters a snow-shoe race and wins; in Dorck's absence he is made to judge the three finalists in the Winter Queen beauty contest. However Jeremy's racing victory brings him only another disaster; he learns more from watching an Indian choose not to win a dog-team race, seeing there the absurd arbitrariness of a world in which "the difference of six feet, after those fifty miles, made one man a loser" and observing the "magnificent indiffer- ence" of the dogs to their loss. Jeremy relates this perception to the final trans- formation of Grey Owl: "The hunter who would not, finally, hunt. The killer refusing to kill." The senselessness of competition becomes similarly apparent when Jeremy discovers the beauty contest is unjudgeable ("I have never in my life seen three people who looked so exactly like each other as those three girls." ), and that he, trained by the academic world to judge ("[I] wanted to write in the mar- gins of those lives: Awk. Frag. Emph. Cap. Fig.") is the man least suited to the role for he is himself in flight from judg- m e n t — from the debilitating judgment of his dissertation advisor (Mark Mad- ham, who is also the narrator of the novel), from the castrating judgment of his wife, and from his own ceaseless, self- deprecatory evaluations. The beauty con- test intentionally evokes the judgment of Paris, that rigged decision that began the destruction of an entire civilization, but Jeremy revises the archetype by refusing to accept the alternatives as defined, thereby freeing himself from the demands for performance that had rendered him physically and spiritually impotent. In the novel's conclusion the sleeping Dorck rises at last, signalling Jeremy's own freedom and his recovered vitality. But it is an ambiguous, partly ironic, freedom that Jeremy attains—the freedom to depart into that Northern void at last, to embrace the inviting silence, perhaps to find a new life, perhaps to perish there. Gone Indian is a fine book, providing a fascinating conclusion to Kroetsch's vision of the development of the Canadian West as emblematic of twentieth century social change. It is a book which should be read at least twice to penetrate beneath its surface, but that is a compliment to Kroetsch as story teller.

Book Review : Breathing Fire into Life

Robert Lepage and Marie Michaud’s graphic novella The Blue Dragon presents an engaging and colourful adaptation of the original theatre play. Illustrated by Québécois artist Fred Jourdain, the book tells the story of forty-six-year-old Claire Forêt, who goes to China in the hope of adopting a little girl. During her stay, Claire meets with her ex-lover Pierre, a Canadian who lives in China and runs an art gallery, and his young Chinese girlfriend, artist Xiao Ling. Claire and Xiao quickly form a close friendship, and when Xiao discovers she is pregnant with an unwanted child, all three characters are forced to confront their future directions in very different ways. At the heart of the narrative lies an exploration of the complexities of interpersonal relationships, but the story also engages with issues of aging, reproduction, parenthood, gender, cultural difference, and creativity. Although the narrative at times borders on soap opera territory, the scenes are written and illustrated with enough nuance that the story remains compelling. Similarly, the conclusion—in which the same scene is repeated three times, but with three different outcomes—complicates what might be an otherwise predictable and simplistic plot, allowing the narrative to remain open-ended and intriguing, even if a little unsatisfying in its denouement.
By far the most impressive feature of the novella is Fred Jourdain’s artwork. Jourdain’s bold use of ink and his subtle washes bring great energy and vitality to the story, and his cinematic, sepia-tinged depictions of Chinese cityscapes and urban interiors provide a brooding, atmospheric backdrop to the narrative events. The range of Jourdain’s style is impressive: his tightly rendered figurative drawings, usually presented within panels, are contrasted by full one- and two-page spreads and abstract compositions. Frequently, and particularly in the case of some of the two-page spreads, the illustrations stand by themselves as reflections on the characters’ experiences of alienation and attempts to locate meaning in Shanghai. My one complaint about the illustrations is that the story’s female characters often appear over-sexualized or doll-like. Claire, for instance, is presented with idealized physical proportions, and the opening scene immediately draws attention to her breasts. Such choices push the novella hazardously close to engaging in the problematic representation of women in comics for which the form has received much criticism, and threaten to undermine the story’s otherwise tender exploration of the conflicts between career, artistic pursuit, and parenting that the female characters face.
The book’s most noticeable weakness is that its integration of word and image is sometimes heavy-handed, likely because it presents the full dialogue of the stage play without transferring some of the detail to visual storytelling. Although the prologue points to the important relationship between textual and visual communication—the opening pages discuss the art of Chinese calligraphy and its ability to suggest complex and multiple images—the narrative does not consistently succeed in achieving the kind of dynamic interplay between word and image that graphic narrative can perform so powerfully. For me, the story is at its strongest when the dialogue is included within panels rather than rendered as script outside of the illustrations, and when scenes occur without overly intrusive or explanatory dialogue.
Still, the provocative issues the narrative raises through each character’s search for meaning and fulfillment keeps the story engaging, and Jourdain’s artwork is frequently spellbinding. The Blue Dragon shows how human lives never follow simple trajectories, and how the endings we think we desire can be altered by the choices we make.