HOW
DO YOU GROW A LEMON IN THE POSTMODERN GARDEN? – SKETCHES OF A LEMON BY
ROBERT KROETSCH
“Sketches
of a Lemon” appeared in 1980 and was published as part of the collection of
poems Field Notes (1981), Completed Field Notes (1989). It is a
signature poem of the postmodern school. Kroetsch’s famous question in the Seed Catalogue “How do you grow …?” does
not appear in this poem explicitly; still the question resounds throughout the
poem.
In the spirit of his postmodern technique, Kroetsch describes the presence of a lemon in terms of absence.
In the spirit of his postmodern technique, Kroetsch describes the presence of a lemon in terms of absence.
The
poem, consisting of twelve sketches, is a story without narrative, with
paradoxical constructions without ordering. The lemon is compared to what it is
not.
“A lemon is
almost round.
Some lemons are
almost round.
A lemon is not
round.” 1
What
Kroetsch applies in these three lines is his technique of naming, unnaming and
renaming. Trying to capture a lemon in words, he says “A lemon is almost
round”, then he unnames it “some lemons are almost round”, which means that not
all lemons are round, and then he defines a lemon through negation: “A lemon is
not round”. The speaker continues to speak of a lemon in terms of negation in
sketch 4:
“Sketches, I
reminded myself,
not of a pear,
nor of an apple,
nor of a peach,
nor of a banana
(though the
colour
raises
questions)”2
The
attempt to determine what lemon is depends on absence. It is the absence of the
lemon attempted to be created in words that invokes a lemon.
In
the poem, Kroetsch is a poet and a painter who actually paints down a lemon on
the table leaving a puzzle for the reader: how to grasp the meaning of the
absurd sketch of a lemon left behind him on the white pages of the book.
The
poem gives off “sensual, visual, tactile, olfactory”3 images,
underlining the connection between the poet and the painter, the abstract and
the concrete. The dominant image is the still-life of a lemon. Through the postmodern
technique of negation, Kroetsch achieves an affirmation. The problem is if a
lemon belongs to the abstract still-life world or if it is attempted to be
created in words and turned into something concrete.
“poem for a
child who has just bit into
a halved lemon
that has just been squeezed:
see, what did I
tell you, see,
what did I tell
you, see, what
did I tell you,
see what did
I tell you, see,
what did I
tell you, see,
what did I tell
you, see, what
did I tell you,
see, what did I
tell you, see,
what did I tell
you, see, what
did I tell you,
see, what did
I tell you, see
what did I
tell you, see,
what did I tell
you, see, what
did I tell you
One could, of
course, go on”4.
The
lemon is written over as a photographic representation of the thing. If the
reader wants to grasp meaning, he should
“see” and find the meaning on his own.
In
sketch 3, the impossibility to create a material object in words is anticipated
by the picture of blackberries, which replace lemons:
“I went and
looked at Frances Ponge’s poem
on blackberries.
If blackberries can be
blackberries, I
reasoned, by a kind of analogy,
lemons can, I
would suppose, be lemons.
Such was not the
case”5.
By
speaking of blackberries to describe a lemon, the speaker stresses the
arbitrary relation between the signifier and the signified and the fact that
meaning lies beyond the level of signification.
In
sketch 2, the arbitrary nature between the signifier and the signified is further
depicted by inserting the memory of the speaker’s father.
“As my father
used to say,
well I’ll be
cow-kicked
by a mule.
He was
especially fond of
lemon meringue
pie”6.
The
paradoxical construction of being “cow-kicked by a mule” also indicates the
arbitrariness and is stressed by the association of his father’s fondness for
“lemon meringue pie”.
A
paradoxical comparison is made in sketches 8 and 12 where the speaker makes the
comparison:
“I’d say, a
lemon is shaped
exactly line an
hour.
………….
The hour is
shaped like
a lemon. We
taste its light
on the baked
salmon.
The tree itself
is elsewhere”7.
By
connecting the abstract with the concrete, the hour and the lemon, the speaker
tries to define the lemon: “The hour is shaped like a lemon”. In “Sketches of a
Lemon”, the tree, as a recurrent trope in Kroetsch’s poems, from which the
lemon originates, is absent and is elsewhere. Instead of a single origin, we
have no origin at all, just multiple possibilities to (re)connect with the
world. Similarly, Kroetsch asserts in the interview that: “Instead of the
temptations of “origin” we have genealogies that multiply our connections into
the past, into the world”8.
Though
the poem consists of meaningless accidental occurrences of words, it offers a
pleasurable opportunity for the reader to decrypt its significance. The reader
is invited to play the role of the maker of meaning. Meaning resides in
reading, not in texts. Garrett-Petts and Lawrence explain that “the accidental
thus becomes a postmodern aesthetic principle asserting the ascendancy of
process over product, horizontal association over vertical dominance”9.
The sketches are brought into new meaningful arrangements by absorbing
the reader in an imaginative and
intellectual engagement.
Great work. I am glad we can see some qulity work here
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ReplyDeleteCould you post more ? Robert Kroetsch is amazing writer, and good work by Tanja C
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